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My heart is frozen
From the coldness of your stare

There is no longer warmth
In the "love" that we share

There is no longer kindness
In that expression you always wear

You don't love me!
You don't even care!

I'm leaving you
Though you say I wouldn't dare

I know that I won't miss you
That's what I declare

It's hard to miss a love that was never even there
Okay...um...this is VERY deep, even for me. I don't particularly know why I wrote this, or how. I've never experienced love or heartbreak before, so I have to hand this to movies and books. Hope you guys like this! Despite how depressing it is!


All comments are appreciated!
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CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm a writer And I must say this is deep. The flow is great. The last stanza is so true as well. Nice job.
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:icondream-nova:
Dream-Nova Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012
Thank you so much!
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:iconcuddleslut17:
CuddleSlut17 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Anytime keep it up :)
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rioza Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Student General Artist
I agree, very potent. But that's an excellent thing. You WANT that to reach the reader when you're writing, and it certainly has here. :3
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:icondream-nova:
Dream-Nova Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012
Thanks a lot :hug:
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ScriptWeaver Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ouch it's.... potent. XD Well written. :)
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:icondream-nova:
Dream-Nova Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012
I know right? And thanks!
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ScriptWeaver Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. :hug: X3
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:icondream-nova:
Dream-Nova Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012
Sorry it was so sad :D
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ScriptWeaver Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
XD Happens. It's all about the emotion. It was well set here. :hug:
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